Katiebabs is a self-proclaimed present day bluestocking with her head always in a book. She runs her own book blog called Babbling about Books and More!
When the words "giggled" and "laughed" are shown almost 10 times in the first chapter, and too many "she said" to count, and all telling, no showing, including awkward dialogue, this proves it hasn't been professionally edited. Because of this lack of professionalism, it shouldn't be for sale for people to buy. Why would you want your shoddy work available for purchase?
This book shouldn't be published because it reads like a first draft that wasn't looked at after the initial writing.