Katiebabs is a self-proclaimed present day bluestocking with her head always in a book. She runs her own book blog called Babbling about Books and More!
The writing here is very green, clunky and needs a lot of content editing. At times I felt like I was reading fan fiction. The heroine is constantly screaming, and everything is over the top in terms to the emotions felt from the main characters. Both love interests are portrayed as creepy and the 16-17 year old characters come across as much younger, more like middle school in the way their immaturity is portrayed. Overall the writing comes across as very juvenile with no real depth to it. Missing dialogue tags and lack of descriptions when characters speak makes this difficult to read.
This story feels like the author is practicing at writing and should really invest in a beta reader, a critique partner, or better yet a writing class.
Big pass on this tale that should have never been published as is.